9 key frames

This first image shows Blake under hostage by Fox, Fox has a knife towards Blake's throat to show he is in power. I have shot this image in the way of rule of thirds to show how Fox has invaded the space of Blake by physically intimidating and dominating him. The shot also shows the location of the scene which is a field, this is to pay homage to the classic western.

This shot is to better establish the location as to also represent the isolation of John and to show his false image of weak against Fox's presence. This can also show how John being the older brother , can see himself as being independent as it is he who comes to his brothers aid.

This image shows John walking towards Fox. The image shows them opposite each other to portray that they are in conflict, Blake is in the middle to show that he is being used as leverage by Fox. John is closer and larger to show that he is a threat.

This is similar as the picture above, but it shows the characters closer to each other to portray the tense atmosphere. The calm body language of John is in conflict with Fox's, as he has attached himself to Blake as if to use him as a shield, this announces his fear towards John's presence and how he uses Blake as his leverage.


This shot is an extreme close up of John's eyes, it portrays the character as mysterious and tense, this gives a mystery to his actions that he chooses to take in the current situation. It also portrays the seriousness of the moment.

This shot focuses on John putting his hand in his pocket to reveal the concealed gun he had in his pocket, it is a sign of his character being unpredictable, it is a low angle to show that Fox still has power even though it is false.

This shows John being bigger then Kruger to show that he has overpowered and dominated him, the facial expression on Kruger's face is of terror and fear to show his true character. The over the shoulder shot better displays the dominance of John

                     

This shows the dominance of the two brothers, as John's size is greater than Blakes', this is to show that he has more power than his brother and that he is in charge. The close space between the brothers shows the intimacy that they share and that they are a team and not in conflict with each other.

The image shows the brothers as equal, whilst Kruger in the background runs away as he has been beat and therefore falls back to safety. The close space of the brothers represents them as united against their enemy and how powerful they are as a team instead of individuals.

Script

FADE IN

Meadow/ Forrest- Midday

Fox stands in the field with Blake held in front of him, Fox has a knife to Blake’s throat. Blake is bruised and cut, his hands are handcuffed.

 

(John dressed in a zip up Jacket and a suit walks towards the men from afar.)

 

Fox: (towards Blake) Is that him?

(Blake Nods his head, Fox tightens his grip on the knife.)

Blake: You should have brought some men,.

Fox: (Threatening) Shut up, if it was my way you woulda been dead by now!, you think that you

scare me?

Blake: (towards Fox) Keep focused, we don’t want you to cut a finger now.(smirks)

(John walks up in front of the men)

(Blake winks towards John)

Blake: (Towards John) You good big boy? (John Nods and looks Blake up and down)

Fox: Where is the money Johnny Boy?

John: You said Blake wouldn’t be touched

Blake: I always said that Jones’ suits couldn’t be trusted

Fox: Shut the fuck up you scum

(Fox pulls Blake back)

Fox: (threatening) Where is the money John?

(John takes a step forward)

John: (Angry) You said he wouldn’t be harmed

Fox: Don’t take that tone with me; you haven’t got the right, SCUM!

John:  what did you call me?

Fox: Scum!

Blake: oh shit, you’ve done it now!

(A pause of a moment, Blake pushes the knife past his face and jumps forward, John takes out a

pistol and grabs Fox by the throat)

John: you want to know where your money is suit?

Fox: You don’t let me go and the boss will know you stitched him up again.

Blake: And why should we give a fuck?

(Blake reaches into Fox’s pocket and grabs the key to the handcuffs)

Fox: Because scum like you can’t afford to have 20 men with guns knocking down your doors!

John: what did you call us?

Fox: (closer to John’s face) SCUM!

(John hits Fox on the nose with the pistol, grabs Fox and slams him on the ground)

John: (shout) I ain’t no scum (points  gun at Fox’s face)

Blake: You gonna kill him?

John: No, (towards Fox) go to your boss and tell him that if he wants his money, he can come and get it himself!

(Bill stands up and runs off into the distance)

Blake: Why didn’t you finish him off?

John: who else is going to tell his boss that we’re hard bastards? (Laughs)

(Blake smiles)

FADE OUT